【赏析】英语六级满分作文:独生子女的利弊
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独生子女的利弊   My father used to talk to me about his five siblings. He used to say that I was unfortunate thatI had none. And I used to envy him and wonder how nice it would be to have a houseful ofbrothers and sisters. I also used to wonder what would happen to me if I were to lose myparents.   Frankly speaking, I do not have to share anything with anybody. I own all my parents’ love. Ican ask for anything I want. I always wear new clothes and eat the best food. Since my parentsspend all their money on me, I can study at the best university of the country.   Lucky as I am, I now and then feel very lonely and I have nobody to complain about myloneliness. How I long for a quarrel with my brothers and sisters! Of course I have classmatesand friends, but they are different. Sometimes I feel so pessimistic that after my parents leavethe world, I will have no blood relatives left to share with me the fond memories of my parents. Furthermore, I am likely to become selfish while I realize the world is for sharing.   So, I am happy but lonely; I am fortunate but piteous; I am loved but spoiled; I am well-bredbut selfish, because I am the only child of the family.

CET6六级作文结构分析:   ·How nice to have brothers and siste rs   ·How miserable to be an only child   ·Advant ages of being an only child , e .g .   ·Disadvantages of being an only child , e .g .   ·As an only child   * happy — lonely   * fortunate — piteous   * loved — spoiled   * well-bred — selfish

CET6六级作文内容分析:   本文是一篇议论文。文中作者以第一人称来谈个人的意见和体会。在短短的第一段中, 作者已表示了对上一代多子女的羡慕, 下一代独生子女的孤独无助, 由此, 自然地过渡到主题“独生子女的利弊”。结尾段是一总结, 反义词的运用使结尾简短而有力。    CET6六级作文万能句型:   siblings n. 兄弟姊妹   a houseful of 一屋子的   frankly speaking 坦率地说   lucky as I am 虽然我很幸运( as 引导让步状语从句, 需用倒装)   complain about 抱怨   pessimistic a. 悲观的   piteous a. 可怜的   spoiled a. 宠坏的   well-bred a. 有教养的


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