【作文】如何让你的作文看起来更有逼格?
发布于 3个月前 作者 知米妞 1286 次浏览 来自 四级

开始写作之前要先注意:

  1. 审清题意,以免跑题。

  2. 拿到试卷后至少把题目要求阅读两遍再落笔,练习中也要注意。字迹清晰,切忌大篇幅改动 。

  3. 不要使用重复词句,不要照抄题目。英语写作中经常出现重复使用某一词、词组、句式或抄写题目 的现象,这样会给阅卷者一种应试者词汇量不足,在凑字数的印象。

前两项就不多讲了,主要是希望大家注意第三项,注意创新,写出看起来就很高级的句子短语。有以下技巧供大家参考:

同义词转化

  1. 大多数人: most people→ the majority of the population

  2. 经常: often → frequently

  3. 我相信: I believe→ from my standpoint, from my perspective

  4. 必须: must→ it is a must for us to…

  5. 知道: know→ be aware of

  6. 因为: because → in that

  7. 最后: at last → eventually

  8. 然而: but → however

  9. 如果: if → provided that

  10. 各行各业的人: all kinds of people → people from all walks of life

  11. 引起,导致: lead to → contribute to

  12. 人: people → individuals

  13. 好的: good → desirable, beneficial

  14. 怀的: bad → undesirable

  15. 很多:many→ numerous

  16. 越来越: more and more→ a(n) increasing/mounting number of

  17. 很:very → extremely

  18. 方面: side → aspects

  19. 表明: show → demonstrate, indicate

  20. 利用:use → utilize

  21. 因此/结果:so → therefore

  22. 部分: part → proportion

  23. 提高: improve → enhance

  24. 改变: change → transform

  25. 强调/重视: emphasize→ attach great importance to

  26. 培养: develop → cultivate

  27. 破坏: destroy→ under mine

  28. 解决: deal with →tackle /figure out

  29. 普遍的: everywhere → universal

  30. 明显的: obvious → apparent

  31. 在当今社会: in the modern society → in the current society

  32. 使:make → enable

very important = of great importance

very significant = of great significance

very valuable = of great value

very useful = of great use

very helpful = of great help

very harmful = of great harm

very beautiful = of great beauty

very helpful = of great help

very necessary = of great necessity

词转化为动词短语

should 应该 = be supposed to

like 喜欢 = be fond of

support 支持 = be in favor of

think 想;认为 = hold the viewthat

agree 同意;赞成 = approve of

conclude 得出结论 = come to/draw aconclusion

raise 提出 = set forth

use 使用 = make use of,take advantage of

词义具体化

good 好的 = outstanding;awesome

strange 陌生的 = peculiar; odd;weird

forever 永远 = perpetually

see 看见 = witness; spot

walk 走 = stride

get 取得 = obtain

help 帮助 = assist

picture 图画 = drawing;painting

big 大的 = immense;enormous; tremendous

避免重复句

避免了重复字词之后,还要避免重复句,遵循以下几种原则。

简洁性原则

两层含义:

1.句式上无重复

一篇作文中,不要频繁出现同一句式,比如重复出现I would like to… We should…等被用烂的句式。

2.语义上无重复

减少不必要的赘述,如并列句前后句意思重复。

长短句交替使用原则

何时适合使用短句?

描述文章的主题句、重要观点及结论句使用短句。

何时适合使用长句?

说理性的语句即罗列论据观点时,适合使用长句。

多使用特殊句式

倒装句:Only in this way can we protect our environment

强调句:it be+被强调部分+that

非谓语动词:ving/ved/to v

主动被动语态交替使用

原句:

They must finish their work before the endof this month because their boss is urging them.

修改后:

Their work must be finished before the endof this month because their boss is urging them.

句子结构要紧凑连贯

写作时要注意前后句连接流畅自然,关联词的使用和举例论证,这一点很关键。

先后次序关系:

首先to begin with / first of all / in the firstplace

其次 second of all/ in the second place

最后last but not least / finally / eventually

因果关系:

because / since / owing to/ in view of 由于

as a consequence /as a result 结果

转折关系:

however / but / and yet

递进关系:

moreover / furthermore 此外

一方面

on the one hand… on the other hand…

For one thing … for another…

并列关系:

and / as well aseither…or… 或者…或者…

对比关系:

similarly / in like manner相似地

in comparison 相较而言

举例论证:

for example /for instance/例如

take…for example /…as an example 以…为例

The example of …can be cited as a properexample to illustrate my point of view.

是一个阐明本人观点的很好的事例

最重要的一点!

词汇!词汇!词汇!

你会了再多的写作技巧,

没有词汇的积累你也没法写出一篇好的作文。


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