【总结】95%的人写英语作文都会出现这些错误
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在之前的推文中,知米妞陆陆续续跟大家分享过各类英语考试干货。不管哪一种,测试题型都会包括作文。知米妞常常苦口婆心地劝大家多积累高级词汇,也推了各类高级词汇和句型给泥萌,但是也埋了一个前提,那就是保证自己表达无误。如果大家的作文中语法错误满篇飞,却还心心念念想着用高级词汇艳压群雄,那不好意思,臣妾也做不到。所以呐,做人最重要的就是少一些语法错误啦,知米妞给大家整理了写作常见错误类型,只希望它们不要出现在你们的作文中~

主谓不一致 1 记尽可能多的新单词是每个英语学习者的愿望. 误Memorizing as many new words as possible are the wish of every English learner. 正Memorizing as many new words as possible is the wish of every English learner.

2 抽烟及喝酒对身体有害. 误Smoking, coupled with/ as well as alcohol, are physically detrimental. 正Smoking, coupled with/ as well as alcohol, is physically detrimental. 正Smoking and alcohol are physically detrimental.

3 如何处理这些问题对政府来说是一个严峻的挑战. 误How to deal with these problems are a serious challenge for the government. 正How to deal with these problems is a serious challenge for the government.

4 饲养宠物所带来的问题很难解决. 误The problems which are brought about by raising pets is hard to solve. 正The problems, which are brought about by raising pets, are hard to solve.

5 电视,连同其他传播方式,帮助我们持续了解最新资讯. 误Television, along with other means of communication, help us to keep informed about the latest news. 正Television, along with other means of communication, helps us to keep informed about the latest news.

中式英语 1 环境污染危害人们的身体健康. 误Environmental pollution hurts people’s health. 正Environmental pollution is physically harmful/ detrimental.

2 如果没有电,我们什么都做不了. 误If have no electricity, we can’t do anything. 正We can do nothing without power.

3 我有一个愿望. 我希望世界和平,没有战争.这也是世上所有人的愿望. 误I have a wish, I wish world peace, no wars, this also is the wish of people in the whole world. 正I wish world peace, without wars, and this is the wish of people worldwide as well. 正I wish world peace, without wars, which is the wish of people worldwide as well.

4 不断地学习很重要. 误Non-stop studying knowledge is very important. 正It is very important to keep acquiring knowledge. 正It is of vital importance to keep acquiring knowledge.

5 游戏占用了学生太多时间,让他们忽略了学习,运动甚至家人. 误Games take up too much time of students, and ignore learning, sports and even family. 正Students spend too much time on games, and ignore learning, sports and even family.

6 污染使我们无法呼吸新鲜空气. 误Pollution makes us cannot breathe fresh air. 正Pollution makes us unable to breathe fresh air. 正Pollution disables us to breathe fresh air

时态语态实用错误 1 数年来,肥胖一直是大多数青少年的问题 误Obesity is a problem to most teenagers for years. 正Obesity has been a problem to most teenagers for years.

2 花在睡觉和工作上的时间需要每天平衡。 误The time spent on sleeping and working should balance every day. 正The time spent on sleeping and working should be balanced every day.

3 与先进的西方国家相比,中国在信息技术上稍稍有些落后。 误Comparing with the advanced western countries, China is a bit slow in information technology. 正Compared with the advanced western countries, China is a bit slow in information technology.

4 这个意外事故与去年发生的那起相类似。 误The accident was similar to one that was happened last year. 正The accident was similar to one that happened last year.

5 随着社会对外开放(with the opening up to the outside world), 人们对于家庭及婚姻的态度已经产生了更好的变化。 误With the opening up to the outside world, greater changes have been taken place in people’s attitude towards family and marriage. 正With the opening up to the outside world, greater changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards family and marriage.

句子不完整 1 出国旅游的众多好处之一就是学着与外国人沟通交流. 误One of the many benefits of overseas traveling learning to communicate with foreigners. 正One of the many benefits of overseas traveling is learning to communicate with foreigners.

2 我会详细地在以下段落中讨论. 误I will discuss in detail in the following paragraphs. 正I will discuss the issue in detail in the following paragraphs.

3 我的室友很讨人厌,我再也不能容忍他了. 误My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put up with him any more. 正My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly put up with him any more. 正My roommate is so troublesome, and I can hardly put up with him any more.

4 2007年的产量比2006年的多. 误The output of 2007 is more than 2006. 正The output of 2007 is more than the output of 2006. 正The output of 2007 is more than that of 2006.

5 是广告让一些运动品牌誉满全球,比如Nike和Adidas. 误It is advertisement makes some sports brands famous worldwide, such as Nike and Adidas. 正It is advertisement that makes some sports brands famous worldwide, such as Nike and Adidas.

单词使用错误 1 政府会花一大笔钱在公共交通系统(大众运输系统mass transit system)。 误The government will cost a large sum of money on the mass transit system. 正The government will spend a large sum of money on the mass transit system.

2 青少年毒品问题是一项艰巨的工作。 误It is a tough job to handle the question of youth drug abuse. 正It is a tough job to handle the problem of youth drug abuse.

3 当他们的孩子为了工作而离开,老人们会觉得很孤单。 误The aged will feel alone when their children leave for work. 正The aged will feel lonely when their children leave for work.

4 如果任何信息都能在网上找到(accessible),很多问题会出现。 误Many problems would rise if any information on Internet is accessible. 正Many problems would arise if any information on Internet is accessible.

5 因为没有充足的经验,他失败了。 误He failed as he lacked of adequate experience. 正He failed as he lacked adequate experience. 正He failed as he was lack (of/in) adequate experience

词性理解错误 1 现在对于我们来说正是熟练掌握英语(attain a fair command of English)的黄金时间。 误Nowadays is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English. 正Nowadays it is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.

2 随着社会的发展,许多新的想法和概念溶入(flux into)我们心中。 误Along with the society development, many new ideas and concepts flux into our minds. 正Along with the social development, many new ideas and concepts flux into our minds. 正Along with the development of society, many new ideas and concepts flux into our minds.

3 有人认为电脑可以替代人类。 误Some people consider that computers can instead human beings. 正Some people consider that computers can replace human beings.

4 在偏远地区,有些孩子没法上学,因为没钱。 误In remote country, some children cannot go to school because no money. 正In remote country, some children cannot go to school because of no money. 正In remote country, some children cannot go to school because of financial pressure.

5 很多年轻人不愿意戒烟,尽管他们知道这有害身体。 误Many teenagers are unwilling to stop smoking despite they know it is physically detrimental. 正Many teenagers are unwilling to stop smoking though they know it is physically detrimental. 正Many teenagers are unwilling to stop smoking despite their knowledge of ill health effects.

句子成分多余 1 在中国,超过一千万人在看(或已看)《越狱》 误In China has more than 10 million people watch Prison Break. 正In China, more than 10 million people watch Prison Break. 正In China, more than 10 million viewers watch Prison Break.

2 人类每天都需要水和空气来维持生命。 误Human race need water and air to survive in everyday. 正Human race need water and air to survive everyday.

3 现在越来越多的人出国了。 误There are more and more people go abroad nowadays. 正There are more and more people going abroad nowadays. 正There are more and more people who go abroad nowadays. 正More and more people go abroad nowadays.

4 大学生掌握一门外语是必须的。 误College students grasp a foreign language is a must. 正It is a must for college students to grasp a foreign language.

5 有70%的孩子认为教育的主要目的应该是去发展自我。 误There are 70% children think that the main aim of their education should be to develop themselves. 正70% children think that the main aim of their education should be to develop themselves.

从句使用错误 1这个国家经济快速增长,吸引了全世界的关注。 误The country, which economy increases quickly, attracts attention worldwide. 正The country, whose economy increases quickly, attracts attention worldwide.

2我喜欢结交一些和我性格,爱好以及社会地位相似的朋友。 误I like to make friends with some who have characters, hobbies, and social status are similar with me. 正I like to make friends with some who have characters, hobbies, and social status similar with me. 正I like to make friends with some whose characters, hobbies, and social status are similar with me.

3 孩子们喜欢圣诞节,那时候他们可以从父母那里得到礼物。 误Children like Christmas, when can get gifts from parents. 正Children like Christmas, when they can get gifts from parents.

4 通过使用电脑,一个人可以获得很多他需要的信息。 误By using computer,one can get many information what they want. 正By using computer, one can get much information that he wants. 正By using computer, one can get much information he wants.

5 这会使世界发生超出我们想象的重大变化。 误It will make the world significant changing that out of our image. 正It will lead to significant changes in the world that are beyond our imagination. 正It will lead to significant changes in the world beyond our imagination.

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