【写作】2016考研英语小作文预测:建议信
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作文的提高除了积累语料素材之外,还要多多加以练习,只有在练习中才能发现自己的语法错误以及段落安排上的问题,还有自己到底是词汇上还是句子上的欠缺。下边是一篇建议信的批改过的习作,希望大家能够从中有所收获。

Dear President, I am Li ming, a college student of our university. I am writing this letter to submit some suggestions about the problems of our canteen which ①leads ②to so many students complain about. First of all, the distance between canteen and library is so far. It causes inconvenience for those who ③like study in library ④all one day. Second, food security in the build is very suspectable. People in ⑤many ⑥mount have always found ⑦fair and others in their ⑧foods when they were having a meal. Third, the ⑨sense of food is inedible and the price ⑩of one is expensive. All in all, I hope you will find my recommendations useful to improve life quality of students. Thank you for hearing my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Li ming

备注: ①是问题的定语从句,问题是复数,所以为lead,不加s ②导致:“lead to doing; lead sb. to do”,所以这里改为“lead many students to complain about” ③like to study 想要学习在图书馆;like studying 喜欢在图书馆学习 ④一整天:all day long ⑤把“many”改为“certain”更合适一些 ⑥此处表示不少人,应用“数量 amount“ ⑦ 食物中会发现“头发hair”,而非“fair” ⑧ food是不可数名词,不用加s ⑨ 食物的味道用“flavor”,“sense”是感觉 ⑩去掉“of one”

对于基础薄弱的考生,无论英语一还是英语二,长难句不会写是一方面,但更要注意的是千万别犯一些简单的语法错误。本来背诵一些长难句是为增彩的,如果有简单的语法错误则会让阅卷老师大跌眼镜,因此尽量避免简单的语法错误。 除了要保证语法上的正确性,小作文特别需要注意的是开头结尾的套话,这个需要大家平时积累。开头结尾的套话一方面能够保证自己的作文没有跑题,另外,这些套话也是遵循书信的写作规范。 接下来需要大家在作文板块上投入大量时间,因为作文还是比较容易短时间内提高分数的。基础好的可以多整理些属于自己的好句子;基础不好的可以训练自己避免犯一些低级的语法错误,在此基础上再进行句子的润色。祝2016考生考研路上马到功成。

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