【雅思】写作高分范文——父母的差异
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In some countries,the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father.Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop inthe future?

首段:改写题目 Fathers and mothers act differently when they educate their children in some societies. There are several reasons about these existing differences.

主体段1:( 原因1)父母的性别差异 The first reason is that parents’ characters determine parental roles. Fathers and mothers have their own gender advantages. For instance, mothers are more patient so they tend to find themselves generally in a more nurturing role. They are often into children’s needs and care about children’s daily life than fathers do. On the contrary, fathers are generally more focused on having high expectations and encouraging them to prepare to cope with the real world. They seem to be tougher than mothers, but their toughness is the root to help children make preparations for future life.

主体段2: (原因2)父母的社会角色差异 Another reason is that fathers and mothers shoulder different financial responsibility. In some societies, women sacrifice their work time to take care of the whole family. They tend to have more time to verbalize with the children, therefore, being regarded as family teachers. However, most of men work fulltime to earn money to raise the family, so they do not verbalize as much as mothers do, tending to be more direct with fewer words. From a disciplinary standpoint, they are likely to impose consequences first and then talk later. Children may see them as the ones who are stricter and impose punishment.

主体段3:父母角色展望 It is obvious that fathers play a critical role in the lives of their children and mothers are essential as well. So blending the different roles and styles into a cohesive approach is the key to effective parenting. If fathers give children a lesson when they have bad behavior while mothers tolerate them,it will be more difficult to manage the children as they will never know the discipline. What’s more,both fathers and mothers need to spend time with children as children can be drawn to one parent or the other because of their affinity.

尾段:总结 As is known,the bond a child secures with parents has a great impact on the child’s life. It is necessary to blend the parenting roles of fathers and mothers rather than just playing a sole role.


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