【托福】口语真题答案点评一
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托福口语真题答案范例:   Sample response 2 P325   The man thinks that the university decision is wrong. According to his opinion, the bus shouldn’t be eliminated. It create a lot of job. And he thinks basically the bus rout should be changed. Due to due to the existing bus roup, many students can’t average to afford the bus. And the overcrowded parking lot is added problem, which is also due to the uh not writing uh university bus. If the students hasn’t a car, and if they cannot afor cannot afford the bus then few student drive a car and obviously overcrowd the parking lot. But is better to meet the change of the bus roup and um most of student should use the bus… (120words)   托福口语真题答案点评:   Rater’s Comments:   1. The speaker’s first language moderately influences her pronunciation, intonation, and pacing. This creates some listener effort.   考生的母语在某种程度上影响了其发音,语调和语速   2. She provides content that is relevant to the task, but her limitations in language use hinder her ability to accurately convey relevant details.   她提及了相关内容,但她较弱的语言运用能力妨碍了她准确地转述相关细节。   3. She fills the entire time with understandable speech.   她在一分钟内持续说完了她基ᴀ上能被理解的答案   4. However, she incorrectly repeats throughout the response time that students cannot afford to ride the bus. She also says that few students will drive cars and overcrowd the parking lots. This creates confusion for the listener. The speaker never mentions the man’s concern about increase noise and traffic on campus.   然而,她在整个一分钟内重复,错误地说“学生们坐不起车”。她还说“只有少 数学生会开私家车,并使得停车场变得拥挤”。这会让者困惑。关于“男生对校园里的噪音和交通拥堵会增加的焦虑”她只字提。


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