【作文】美文——帮助他人
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Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Helping Others in Need. You should write at least 120 words and base you composition in the outline below:

  1. 现在,在看到他人遇到困难时,很少有人去伸出援手
  2. 这个现象产生的原因
  3. 我的看法。

参考范文: My View on Helping Others in Need In modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times. Then what’s wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketinghousing prices, expensive medical expenditure and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing by indifferently is their only choice. However, is it necessary to be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment. What’s more, the evaluation criteria for judging one individual’s success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time. 写作点评: 本题是写作中常见的现象分析及观点阐释性作文,正确运用表示原因、结果的句式,采用一定的论证方法,如举例、名言警句等,条理清晰、语义逻辑准确且鲜明的表达出个人的观点是该题夺取高分的保证。 Foh0YW7bBlRA9858xtFt6N6zcKF8.jpg 来源:精品学习网

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